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Your diary was really enjoyable. I'm going to discuss your layout first. It is good for the holidays. Very simple, with a christmas tree pattern at the bottom. I'ts simple, but nice. You have no mistakes with your links either. It was cool to see all of the rings that you are in, and how they were alphabetized. You get kudo points with me because you are a bookworm, I adore reading! I also like Red Hot Chilli Peppers. I really like their By the Way album. You have excellent grammar, and I only saw one spelling mistake throughout my reading. I adore how your diary is archived. You have seperated your freshman year of college from your sophmore year. It makes it easy to navigate.

Your entries are so full of emotion. You are a good writer. Usually it takes a very long time to be able to write with emotion like you do, but it seems to come natural with you. I wish I could write as emotionally as you do, but I guess it takes time. I have been with diaryland for over a year now, I'm still not at that stage yet. I read some of your entries from your freshman year, but I read all of your sophmore up to date, because that is what I started reading first. I have gotten to know you through your entries. I enjoyed this entry. I think it is awesome that you have a twin. I have always wanted a twin, I think it would be neat. You are the first person to ever say that you like oragami. I think it would be fun to learn, but I will probably get really impatient and frustrated and quit. I like this entry also because it is so funny. I think it is hilarious that you cut your barbies hair, and then get mad when the hair does not grow back the way it was before. *smile* I think it is absoultely gross to have hear someone chew too. It just sounds nasty. You would think the person would know how foul it is, but I guess they do not.

This entry I really understood. I have been in your position before I am too nice of a person sometimes, and I find myself being walked over sometimes, but I am learning that I cannot let people do that to me. I have to stand up for myself and not let people take advantage of me. I have been taking control of my life recently, and it feels great. And lastly, this entry from your freshman year, really hit home. I have realized that you cannot hide your feelings, espeically if they are bad, that you must talk about it. It will hurt to do so, but you will feel so much better. Keeping things bottled up inside, is just not the way to go.

I really enjoyed reading your diary. I know that I will definitely come back to read frequently. I totally can understand where you are coming from because I am a college student too. I know how it feels be to stressed from work and school and such.

Pat, I think you deserve an A!

Reviewed by: Michelle