chi-angel
Take me dancing in the moonlight.
Your layout is very pink. I personally am not a big fan of pink so I won't talk about your layout. I do not understand how your title relates to your diary, would you mind telling me?
You have 30 entries in 3 months. That's not many, but completely fine with me. The length of an entry does not really matter. It is the content of the entry that counts. Since my last entry was such a short one I'll try to make it up to you in this one. You don't need to make it up to us for anything. It's YOUR diary and you should only update when you please and when its necessary. Like I always say, a diary is for venting, not for pleasing reviewers.
It's nice to see you happy here. I felt for you too. Your life is miserable the rest of the time so my advice to you is - try to look on the bright side of life. I appreciate your flash back style of writing. You seem to recap and reflect very well. Your diary has a balance of slight humor and emotion, which was interesting for me as I read. You just need to give more details on how your life is picking up and information about your new environment.
I enjoyed hearing about how you were adjusting and how you felt about certain things. It is sad that you miss your life and friends in Chicago but I am glad you know that this move was for your own good. I wish you all the best!
Kelly here scores a A -.
Reviewed by: Michael
