onesexypollo
Looks like: a very serious diary, because of the shades of blue and the imageless concept. Most inexperienced reviewers would say that this is boring and shit like that, but I say it's brilliant. Credit goes to Raging Pistachio Designs.
It's really: not that a serious diary at all. I'm surprised that your tone of writing is almost similar to mine. You know people read your diary, and as I read through it, I smiled at your expression and your occasional smilies. Little touches like that make a difference, really. I read from this to this, and there were a few boring entries, but all in all, I enjoyed myself. Great.
Choice Cut: "He has almost lived a year. Last year, I wanted him to die cuz he killed Rojo and Mickey Mouse. But now, here he is trying to kill himself, and I want him to live! Sunset Fire... keep living! I promise I'll buy you some friends to kill!"
Final Verdict: From your writing, you seem to be enthusiastic and outgoing. You didn't talk about unpleasant things either, thank god. One thing though - you have some issues with correct grammar, punctuation and spelling, which I suggest you work on soon. Other than that, it's the best I've seen in a while. Keep it up!
Score: 4/5


